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Kia ora Hautanioa, I like the way your character flies through the air and gets bigger and bigger as he comes closer. I bet you had fun choosing your backgrounds! Ka pai to mahi. from Mrs Torrie
Bonjour. I am KC from St Mary’s School. I really liked the character flying around the sky I learnt that you enjoyed changing the background Maybe you could put more slide on it Please visit my blog here
Bonjour Hautanioa. I am Timiah from St Mary’s School Gisborne. I really liked how your character flies beside the plane. Did you think about putting a space between enjoyedchanging & changemy so that it makes scence. Maybe you could read your writing before you press publish. Please visit my blog here
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Kia ora Hautanioa,
ReplyDeleteI like the way your character flies through the air and gets bigger and bigger as he comes closer. I bet you had fun choosing your backgrounds!
Ka pai to mahi.
from Mrs Torrie
Bonjour. I am KC from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the character flying around the sky
I learnt that you enjoyed changing the background
Maybe you could put more slide on it
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
KC
Bonjour Hautanioa. I am Timiah from St Mary’s School Gisborne.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how your character flies beside the plane.
Did you think about putting a space between enjoyedchanging & changemy so that it makes scence.
Maybe you could read your writing before you press publish.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Timiah